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Post by Adelaide Swan on Aug 1, 2008 21:40:31 GMT -5
Adelaide is walking on the lakeshore her shoes off and in her hand, her bag slung across her shoulder and her hair blowing in the wind. She's wearing a red and black plaid skirt and a black HIM tank topThe water licking her feet and her legs with each incomming wave, she was looking for new kids to take back to the hideout.
She stops for a second and dug into her black bag and takes out her smokes and lights one up. Taking a long drag off it and letting it out, she continues to walk along the shore looking out for teens around the area.
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Post by Casey Wilson on Aug 5, 2008 0:12:13 GMT -5
The smoke is doing its job, but unfortanitly the job thats on hand is not working out so well. Voices run across her mind coming like bomb shells one right after another, She Violently turns thinking someones behind her, but its just the incoming rush of the ocean at her every beck and call. She shakes her head and contiunes to keep walking. up a head no more that 30 feet from her is a fire, Shes Compelled buy the bright lucid light or Red, orange, and yellow dancing across the drift wood. "This is it" she thinks to herself and walks slowly with the feeling of sand underneath her feet. she greets them with a huge grin on her face hiding something benieth it and quitly begins to speek " My name is Adelaide". Mmkay, a few problems with this. -You have not posted a bio that has been accepted by an admin -The bio you did post needs to be posted in it's own thread, not as a reply to the template. -Your character can not be 'not of human descent' if it wants to be on this site. -Your post should be in past tense, third person, not present tense. (That one goes for you too Gatorade) -I dunno why your character is saying their name is Adelaide. Their application says 'Crimsontys', as does your profile. Though your character does require a first and last name. |
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